Children should be allowed to eat chocolate when ever they want to

L.I. WALT write a persuasive writing to persuade my reader.    

I think children should be allowed to eat chocolate because it yummy and sweet.

Chocolate  has milk and it makes my bones strong and healthy.

Children should not be allowed to eat chocolate because it has sugar and sugar makes you hyper active.

Some children doesn't like dark chocolate because dark chocolate is yuck.