Luke is a 13 year old, tall boy. He goes to St.Peter's school and he lives in a big white house with his parents. He doesn't have that much friends because he is shy.
One day a boy called Luke was walking back home. Suddenly he saw a box on the side walk. He looked inside of the box and saw a German shepherd puppy. He picked up the dog and covered his body with his school jacket to keep him warm.
Luke took the dog up and ran quickly back home. Once he got back, Luke fed the puppy with some leftover pork from the night before.
After 3 weeks the puppy had grown and gotten fatter. Luke got tired of calling the dog 'dog' so Luke told him that he is going to name him Blue. The dog looked very happy when Luke named him.
After that, they became very close friends and played together every day. Luke taught Blue lots of tricks and because Blue was a clever dog and he learnt all the tricks.
Learning Intention: We are learning to follow the correct structure of a narrative.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I write the title, orientation, problem, conclusion about a boy and a dog.
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